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authorJeroen van Meeuwen (Kolab Systems) <vanmeeuwen@kolabsys.com>2012-04-01 13:00:18 (GMT)
committerJeroen van Meeuwen (Kolab Systems) <vanmeeuwen@kolabsys.com>2012-04-01 13:00:18 (GMT)
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downloadkolab-docs-64a814dad480a281aae360b2c15d668638a2c9b6.tar.gz
Update verbiage on Groupware Overview
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diff --git a/Architecture_and_Design/en-US/Groupware_Overview.xml b/Architecture_and_Design/en-US/Groupware_Overview.xml
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@@ -60,7 +60,7 @@
All of the former are capabilities provided by Kolab Groupware itself.
</para>
<para>
- Collaboration also includes, however;
+ Technologies assisting collaborative efforts also include, however;
</para>
<para>
<itemizedlist>
@@ -118,8 +118,9 @@
</para>
<para>
- While each of the aforementioned aspects of groupware and collaboration is available as Free Software, integration is another topic.
+ While each of the aforementioned aspects of groupware and collaboration is available as Free Software, integration is an entirely different topic.
</para>
+ <!--
<para>
The following is a list of items that somehow, to some extent, relate to a groupware environment;
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@@ -396,5 +397,6 @@
</itemizedlist>
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+ // -->
</chapter>